Friday, September 2, 2011

Description in the third person

Description in the third person
            By reading the first few things on the list, I can already tell that she has very good ideas, likes a good deal at a yard sale, and a do it yourself kind of gal. Her in-laws must like her if they bought her a new computer; it’s always a plus to be on their good side. Her desk sounds cluttered but slightly organized with some random items thrown on there, hence the socks and sippy cup- but, she must be on the go all the time with three children and a full calendar. If her desk is in the toy room then she has to be one heck of a multi-tasker and able to drown out sound like a glass door. She likes her space to smell good with candles, so even if it isn't clean at least it will smell good! The broken door knob tells me that she had to get someone out of a locked room in a hurry because all of the tools and butter knife is thrown on her desk. Plus who doesn't try the butter knife trick, but then fails and unscrews it all instead, and then busts it! Oh well as long as nobody was hurt. With it being so busy and hectic, and three kids running around she still manages to pay her bills on time (the somewhat organized mom’s slot for the “paid bills” section is empty). Huh, well, they must have a good budget. Scrap booking must be one of her hobbies, with all of her kids pictures scattered everywhere. You can tell she is a very proud mother and wife, her kids and her husband sound like award winning trophy’s,  to remind her of all of their life achievements and special moments captured in a picture. 

1 comment:

  1. After the details in the inventory list comes the summarizing paragraph to pull it all together and this is a fine one, full of personality and giving us the stories behind the story of the list.

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