Might work as a topic--you make clear their similarities but only offer two differences in the bridge to the rest of the essay.
Biggest problem though is the lack of a hook--your first sentence simply states the topic in the flattest possible way without giving the reader any juice, any real reason to read on.
Might work as a topic--you make clear their similarities but only offer two differences in the bridge to the rest of the essay.
ReplyDeleteBiggest problem though is the lack of a hook--your first sentence simply states the topic in the flattest possible way without giving the reader any juice, any real reason to read on.