Waiting Staff
Behind the scenes, beyond those two swinging double doors is what really goes on in waitress’s home away from home. Where she feels most comfortable in expressing her true feelings, thoughts and errors. Her co-workers pretty much know her past, her present and her hopes for the future. In some cases she is forced to hear the same about them and some of their stories can be a little bit to revealing. Typically, as a waitress there’s usually at least one person you can call a “good friend”. When you call in sick and get stuck picking up a shift that you normal wouldn’t, that’s when you get stuck with the “goofy girl”. Then no matter what, you always have that one certain guy that likes to think he’s the “cat’s meow”. One of the rules of work that a lot of employers like to put in their speech of hiring a person is, leave your personal life at home. We all know that never happens!
Sounds interesting, but where's Jayme-Lynn in that opening? Why cut yourself off in the writing from visualizing the places you've worked and the people you've worked with? Why not use the first-person singular instead of second person and third person?
ReplyDeleteO.k. i can do that. So do you want me to write an outro to this intro or the other one??
ReplyDeleteUp to you.
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